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CAPT.ACE23

i am the masked knight current rank c/LCDR
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the truth of death

Wed Jan 11, 2012 10:13 AM EST
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By capt.ace23

death is silent
death having dogged my steps
death having taken that witch i love
death having left me nothing but ruins
yet though it all
death is silent

fear is silent
fear having unmanned me
fear having made men in to cowards
fear having turned hope to dust
yet though it all
fear is silent

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capt.ace23

enjoy and again be critics it wont hurt me i promise i need the advise

  • 2 votes
Reply#1 - Wed Jan 11, 2012 5:23 PM EST
Hugo C. Gonzalez 76

Not bad at all, in fact i like, although i like corollating lots of things, had never done it that way, very nice.

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#1.1 - Wed Jan 11, 2012 6:31 PM EST
capt.ace23

thanks

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#1.2 - Wed Jan 11, 2012 6:34 PM EST
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